A New Day

Main Characters

Damon McCallister

Role: Protagonist
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 130
Physical condition: thin
Hair: dark
Hair texture: straight
Eyes: dark
Age: 17y 7m
Complexion: pale
Attitude toward life: something to be scared about
Attitude toward death: would it really be so bad?
Philosophy of life:
Tobacco use: pack a day
Alcohol use: one episode
Other drug use:
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Alex Stark

Role:
Height: 5'11"
Weight: 200
Physical condition: strong
Hair: graying
Hair texture: straight
Eyes: blue
Age: 62y 9m
Complexion: tanned
Attitude toward life:
Attitude toward death:
Philosophy of life: everything works out, given time
Tobacco use: two packs a day
Alcohol use: moderate
Other drug use: n/a
Other bad habits:
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Simon Stark

Role:
Height: 5'11"
Weight: 170
Physical condition: slim but powerful
Hair: blond
Hair texture: straight
Eyes: hazel
Age: 27y 5m
Complexion:
Attitude toward life: every day's a battle
Attitude toward death: whatever
Philosophy of life:
Tobacco use: two packs a day
Alcohol use: moderate (sometimes heavy)
Other drug use:
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Julie Stark

Role:
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 140
Physical condition:
Hair: salt and pepper
Hair texture: straight
Eyes:
Age: 62y 11m
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Supporting Characters

Bob Stark

Role:
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Weight:
Physical condition: trim and strong
Hair: dark
Hair texture: straight
Eyes: blue
Age: 22y 6m
Complexion:
Attitude toward life:
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Tobacco use: two packs a day
Alcohol use: moderate
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Old Tom McTighe

Role:
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Age: 69y 6m
Complexion:
Attitude toward life:
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Tobacco use: three packs a day
Alcohol use: moderate to heavy
Other drug use: occasional
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Sarah Stark

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Age: 14y 9m
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Jake Stark

Role:
Height: 6'0"
Weight: 175
Physical condition: strong
Hair: dark
Hair texture: wavy
Eyes: blue
Age: 29y 2m
Complexion:
Attitude toward life:
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Tobacco use: two packs a day
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Cy Stark

Role:
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 170
Physical condition: fit and strong
Hair:
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Age: 20y 10m
Complexion:
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Dek Badenhorst

Role:
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 185
Physical condition: pure muscle
Hair: light brown
Hair texture: wavy
Eyes: hazel
Age: 22y 9m
Complexion: tanned
Attitude toward life:
Attitude toward death:
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Tobacco use: occasionally
Alcohol use: moderate
Other drug use: occasionally
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Terry Mayer M.D.

Role:
Height: 5'11"
Weight: 190
Physical condition: fit
Hair: grey
Hair texture: straight
Eyes: dark brown
Age: 61y 9m
Complexion:
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Phil Stark

Role:
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 175
Physical condition: fit and strong
Hair:
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Age: 20y 10m
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Jason Engel

Role:
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 180
Physical condition: stocky
Hair: dark
Hair texture: wavy
Eyes: blue
Age: 27y 1m
Complexion:
Attitude toward life:
Attitude toward death:
Philosophy of life:
Tobacco use: two packs a day
Alcohol use: moderate
Other drug use:
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Haddon O'Connell

Role:
Height: 5'9"
Weight: 170
Physical condition: fit and strong
Hair: black
Hair texture: wavy
Eyes: brown
Age: 19y 1m
Complexion: olive
Attitude toward life:
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Tobacco use: n/a
Alcohol use: moderate
Other drug use: n/a
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Officer Joel Blum

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Age: 48y 2m
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Vic Zwiers

Role:
Height: 5'11"
Weight: 175
Physical condition: lithe and strong
Hair: dark brown
Hair texture: wavy
Eyes: blue
Age: 18y 1m
Complexion:
Attitude toward life:
Attitude toward death:
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Tobacco use: two packs a day
Alcohol use: moderate
Other drug use:
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Sam Machuca

Role:
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 135
Physical condition: thin (surprisingly strong)
Hair: brown
Hair texture: wavy
Eyes: brown
Age: 20y 1m
Complexion: olive
Attitude toward life:
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Philosophy of life:
Tobacco use: two packs a day
Alcohol use:
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Pete Stark

Narrative

Two (2) protagonists: Damon and Alex
→ both experience an arc, the defining feature of that role
→ each is the reflection to the other

60-Page Short Story

Research

OzFarmer (farming forum)

Notes

Alex always taps out his cigarettes three times.

During fire, Terry & Haddon are in lookout plane overhead.

Running away from your problems is a family trait: just as Damon has run away (into the haze of drugs; for days on and muling for Decker; into the outback, where he causes the fire), Alex ran away to Australia from the hurt and loss he's never processed from having lost his parents when so young.

final straw (for Julie at least) is the fire—Damon must return home—phone call to Ben

Simon: "Cy goes to t'other side of the country, and he's your golden boy. I move one station over, and it's the end of the world. Bob gets a sheila pregnant at fifteen, and you can't wait to be 'Poppy'. I'm an established adult with a home and an income, I get Angie pregnant, and I never hear the end of it."

Julie argues Damon, proving to be such a recalcitrant & disruptive intrusion into their family (they do have little Peter to think about), must return home—Alex is adamant he remain:
Julie: "Alex, saving Damon isn't going to rescue the relationship you've let derail with your son."

Tension at climax: will Simon save Damon?
→ Simon: "You got yerself a replacement son. Why don't you just go with him and leave me the bloody 'ell alone?!"

set up a situation where Alex takes his correct role in Damon's life as his uncle, not his father → Alex relents finally and agrees Damon can return home with his father's permission → Damon calls Ben, who couldn't care less if Damon stays or comes home (Ben: "We're getting a divorce—you're her problem now. Get her permission.")

Notes concerning “A New Day”:

as owner of the Stark Haven sheep station, Alex is known as a "grazier" (equivalent to North Am. term "rancher")
weave in "Vault of Heaven"? Midpoint, maybe?
blowflies = “blowies” (ubiquitous)
bushfires: fire breaks (would be evident all over Stark Haven); also, fire is set deliberately to burn away old growth to make room for the new grass
radio portion of School of the Air lasts only about a half hour; rest of the time spent schooling is done by the parent (need to think through more carefully the set up they have for schooling—radio room seems a little small as described right now)
- School of Isolated and Distance Education
How many square miles is 602,000 acres? 943.75
What crops are they going to be growing in such arid Outback area?
change the Saturday night scene from a night on the town to a three-or-four-times-a-year “county fair” sort of Outback affair; keep the aspect of the scene where Damon gets drunk and goes off with Amanda; think about changing the scene to such an extent that we abandon Alex not not coming with them and even Simon not shearing his flock
Should Alex have more jackeroos? Is the number depicted realistic? Does he have any jilleroos?
Bradshaw Station (Northern Territory) = 4,000 square miles, with a cattle herd of 10,000 head
maybe Alex has a cattle herd, as well as sheep
consider Alex owning and using helicopter(s) on the station
also, consider Alex using bullcatchers (remember, very few stations do any bullcatching any longer; also, seems this method would be appropriate only for large animals, such as cattle); bullcatchers are used during the “feral muster”
the mail plane comes to the extremely isolated homesteads only once a week and may be the homestead’s only contact with the outside world for weeks on end
Christmas is a day off, one of the few during the year
need to beef up the portrayal of the use and care of the horses; horses would be a much larger part of the operation of Stark Haven than currently depicted
“ringers” = seasonal help (7-month “muster” season begins in April)
“ringers”, “jackeroos”, “jilleroos”, “stockmen”
a drover trains his men as he would brash, young colts
McBean arrived at Bradshaw in the early ‘50's, where he was one of the few whites who learned from the Aboriginal stockmen—he describes it as an “adventure”
Fiona described how her nearest friends are up to fifty kilometers away
after the cattle are mustered, they are inoculated, branded, dehorned and castrated
the stock camp is hours away from the main homestead
a typical day at the stock camp begins at 6a.m. with breakfast and ends at sundown
Joyce, an Aboriginal, is the camp cook (“worth her weight in gold”) and prepares three meals a day; when the men are working, she also prepares a morning and an afternoon smoko; says how she looks out for them, like a mother almost, while at the camp, and they look out for her, in town and places like that
while at the stock camp, the men work every day for five to six weeks, then take a number of days off in a stretch
rodeos are very popular; events such as a rodeo or a regional fair are a time to come together, be with friends and let the hair down; such events happen only three or four times a year
November speaks the end of the muster season
northern sections of The Northern Territory and Queensland nicknamed “The Top End”
“barras”, short for barramundi
“motor car”

Questions to be answered

1) Are helicopters appropriate for sheep droving?
2) Would Alex own a plane?
3) How common is the practice of isolated families sending children away to boarding schools?
4) Is there a difference between “jackeroos” and “ringers”? How many of each would Alex have?

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